[Geako Art] Voulenteer needed for Japanese Translation/Proof Reading

[Geako]

HI @Geako Here.

I do Fan-coloring of the following title Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu (Fan Colored).
Being very tired of absense of my Favorite Girl of this Manga due infrequent updates, very slow pacing,
I drew my own Fan-work featuring her Danjo-hi 1: 39 No heikō sekai de omoi de sumire no sakurasō (sakura sou) wa futsūjanai...

I uploaded a machine translation in Nico Nico but It was horrible.


Can someone help in translating my fan-work in Japanese? I will make basic translation, but I need proofreading done and re-write where needed..

 

[Womfer57]

I could give it a shot

 

[Megukagi]

While I don't speak Japanese, I can give some advice when it comes to making the phrases sound natural in English

 

[Geako]

While I don't speak Japanese, I can give some advice when it comes to making the phrases sound natural in English

I want to translate it to Japanese. I write original in English, You can help in refining dialogs in English.