Gendai no Saikyou Heishi, Isekai Dungeon o Kouryaku Suru - Ch. 2

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So instead of telling the guy you brought here anything which you cna do at any time and he's been through a whole dungeon back. You are like "Don't worry bout that now" like come on, this is so contrived.
 
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The concept is interesting but this feels a little silly. Its a bit too nonsensical for him to be able to instantly analyze and kill a monster with a knife like that. If he were from some sci-fi world or something like that then yea, but he's just a modern soldier. With that weapon switching item he's just going to be ridiculously OP using all manner of vehicles and weapons. I'm at least interested to see where this goes for a bit.
 
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So instead of telling the guy you brought here anything which you cna do at any time and he's been through a whole dungeon back. You are like "Don't worry bout that now" like come on, this is so contrived.

He did tell them to be quiet and he's been on alert/fighting this whole time. Narratively it hasn't been relevant either so I don't see how that's contrived. Seems like you're just overanalyzing. It has some problems, but that's not one of them.
 
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aha.....someone yells at you "watch out, above you"....and you keep walking at a leisure speed and start asking questions instead of, dunno...jumping away or looking up maybe; if that's how it is, you derserve to be squashed.
 

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