Gentleman Devil - Vol. 1 Ch. 6 - The Previous Succubus Captain, Martha

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Thanks for the chapter!
As romboids mentioned, plural form of succubus is succubi, not succubuses. Page 5 wouldn't that be ...Martha, never forgot about her previous lover. Not his? Also page 6 should be Ever since, not Every since. Be interesting to see if the pig actually gets anywhere with his rebellion or has it collapse from infighting. Wonder if Martha is actually going to help out or take everyone out in an attempt to curry favor? Also, how long is Lucifer going to be travelling for and how will he recognize what he's looking for?
 

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