Gesu no Ongaeshi - Oneshot

[youdontknowwho]

This is so bad it's hilarious. Attempt rape out of nowhere for the climax? Proclaiming you will never make her cry in front of a bunch of would-be rapists? This dude needs to pair up with a decent writer if he doesn't want his art go to waste.
@animepig Not at all. It's just because oneshots with cute/sexy girls on the cover are more enticing to readers and more widely read as a result.

 

[Izunia]

this one shot made my dick soft.

i literally cannot stand this shit

1/10

 

[Ryder96]

@jaydoodle It was the right thing to do to call the cops but just the thought that he would have beat him up would make the MC look more manly (maybe)

@liquidsword Let's say there were no Cops around or any other People, what would you do? Act on your own or run away and let her get raped? I understand that he could get in trouble
If you find it acceptable to start with an insult towards me... There was no bad meaning behind my comment

Anyway have a nice Sunday you two

 

[Rathendar]

i can't say it was the best story, and it had plenty of standard cliche... but the art was nice, i liked the heroine, and that double mouth stuff with the toilet brushes came outta nowhere and killed me!

I give it a thumbs up from my laughter tears alone.

 

[Tertium777]

"Stop right there criminal scum" 😆

 

[EcchiLove]

not gonna lie the almost rape came out of nowhere i enjoy the NTR doujins but this was so chill till that moment that it give me a wtf moment

 

[toydamashii]

This came out in 2017? It feels like it's 20 years old, goddamn

 

[onionskins]

MC: 8/10
FMC: 7/10 (very basic)
Story: 7.5/10
Overall: 6 for me (WTF with that sudden rape scene come out of nowhere, i can name any ntr doujins with better setup than this shit)

 

[VawX]

Very generic manga, but not bad I guess mmm...

 

[Courora]

 

[henkingu]

Lol

 

[Richman]

I don't like the extreme part of the artstyle, but the story was decent.

 

[justforthelulz]

That is some severe mood whiplash.

 

[Darcow]

Series when!?!?!?

 

[Derpsnow]

And then he died

 

[Forsaken6]

Well, is also fine this way

 

[_dy11_]

get me the second chap ASAP

 

[Juggernautbob]

The Classic ,, I say something cool but let others do the Work and be a Coward‘‘ move

Calling in backup isn't cowardice, it's intelligence. Why get beaten by three people when you can have them all swiftly arrested? Trust me nobody looks cool for trying to take on three guys and ending up a bloody pulp.