Ghost Sweeper Arai-kun - Oneshot

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This has a lot of potential, but I would also be okay with it if it stayed a oneshot.

Altogether an amazing read!
 
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This gives me slight Black Lagoon vibes. Hope it becomes a full story.
 
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nice character design and while I GET what they're doing with the MC and will probably piss myself too in his shoes, I don't believe that's the trait you want your MC be remembered of, at least if you want your work to get past oneshot or axed early stage.
 
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Ooh, nice read, would probably need a few changes for serialization but as a single story, great.
 
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Well, acting while still being scared IS the definition of bravery. This story is nice and seeing a non-super MC for once is also a breath of fresh air.
 

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