The premise sounds good, and the main character looks cool, but... The rape scene is so unnecessary. The horde of monsters gaining on them cackling about how hungry they are and now they have meat... Followed by the actual dismemberment and eating of most of the party... That works! Heck, grit up the visuals more, make the monsters less cartoony and more grotesque!
This is just awkward and uncomfortable. It is meant to be both a horrific moment for us to witness, yet titillating fan service. Boo!
Since this and chapter 2 seem to be 2/3 of the intro, I am gonna read a bit more... But I don't I know if I'll stick with this.