Gikou Taichi "Skill Lender" no Torikaeshi ~Toichi tte Saisho ni Itta yo na?~ - Vol. 8 Ch. 65

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Its kinda whiplashing me how we get so many chapters of a manga that was semi-dead for so long I barely remember what it was about. And when I do remember - this new ark seems a bit "excessive" if you will compared to earlier story, especially with how little time on screen MC has.
 
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I despite bad writing.

Stop everything you're doing, to use talk-no-jutsu, explaining away all the secrets of your army, to the enemy.
This is just bad writing. Authors forgetting they're writing about 3d events, not putting words on a page.

Take a stopwatch, and try seeing how long it would take to say the lines on the page.
It bends beyond suspension of disbelief, and veers into alternate "I saw another author do this" degeneracy.

Like taking a meme literally. But worse.
 
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Now why tf would you divulge your supposedly secret strategy to your enemy?
 
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I despite bad writing.

Stop everything you're doing, to use talk-no-jutsu, explaining away all the secrets of your army, to the enemy.This is just bad writing. Authors forgetting they're writing about 3d events, not putting words on a page.

Take a stopwatch, and try seeing how long it would take to say the lines on the page.
It bends beyond suspension of disbelief, and veers into alternate "I saw another author do this" degeneracy.

Like taking a meme literally. But worse.
this series has a pretty neat concept, but Christ the author is terrible at using it well. This is spiralin
 

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