Girlish Sweet

[MangaDex]

 

[Oeconomist]

The pages in the English-language translationof chapter 11 are out of order. The uploader account has not been on-line in about 11 months.

Even setting aside coherence of the story, note that the seventh image has a page number of “157”, the ninth of “159”, the tenth of “160”, the thirteenth is marked “Fin”, but the sixteenth has the chapter title (“1/3 July”), the eighteenth is “147”, the nineteenth is “148”.

The best attempted correction would consult the original printed version, and the next best attempt would check a reliable set of raws. But there is a newly uploaded French translation, which seems to have the pages in proper order.

Based upon that French translation, I think that the proper correction would [ul]take present pages 16 to 22 and make these pages 3 to 9,
then take present pages 3 to 15 and make these pages 10 to 22.[/ul] (That reordering would leave pages 1, 2, and 23 in their present positions.)

ATTN: @Lymus

 

[mmosimca]

Even with the mistake below fixed, this manga is a bit confusing. The translation has multiple mistakes with characters' names I think. On top of that, the timeline skips back and forth constantly as well as shifting perspectives.