Goblin Is Very Strong - Vol. 5 Ch. 41

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Well the author said it himself: it was too diluted.

Still we got an ending and yeah it was an okay ride.
 
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It had a good plot, characters, world, and potential ideas.

Could've done a lot better at pacing and building the world, even if the world itself is amazing.
To me, all the individual pieces were amazing, it was how they were fitted together.

Also, the yuri couples should've been way more fleshed out, rather than just mostly being fanservice and teasing.
 
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Love how the author jokes about how the story would have continued with some silly plots and people scream "AXED!".
From how many people missed the joke, Troll Author Is Very Strong!
There was nothing else to tell, (why keep dragging the same bits with the same jokes?) the last intro to the new character and the reset concept was a waste for Salamander's part imho tho. But tied some lose ends about Demon King.
Aki said to stay, Wasabi said to become true friends with friendly matches. The main conflict of the story is resolved.
 
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Just read this due to an April 1st ad. Good read!
It's a bit jarring switching between the low stakes "killing just temporary turns people into coffins" and "haha if we take away their protection they stay dead!".
Cute little pschopaths.
 

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