after only 1 glance , i already HATE the male elf : fugly goatee , fugly hair of the "frigid" b!tch elsa of arendelle .
the 1st few pages are influenced by the game Dragon's Crown : undead , the poses of elf archer , witch/sorceress , fighter/swordman , minotaur , dragon , kraken , demon king , skeleton .
this chapter is trying to fix the mistake of chapter 0.1 . Show, don't tell . the new artist drew some scenes for the boring texts in chapter 0.1 .