Goblin Slayer Gaiden 2: Tsubanari no Daikatana - Ch. 2
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it will be very funny if this manga gets axed again , the 2nd time , lol .
the probem with this sword maiden version is her mouth and eyes are too wide , the art-style makes her look more evil than innocent .
the new artist also fixed this mistake :
- chapter 0.1 : 3 noob adventurers have the money to buy brand-new equipments , ale beers , and delicious foods ?
- chapter 2 : now they only buy ale beers , no expensive foods .
it feels like the new artist read my comment in chapter 0.1 , and they fixed the mistakes that i pointed out , lol : https://mangadex.org/chapter/541723/comments .
i wrote :
" page 33 :
- some random , edgy cosplayer says : you got a good sword .
- wut ? the samurai kid didnt even draw the sword out of the sheath , so how do you know the sword is good or bad ?
OMG , the sorceress 's outfit looks so stupid , and her face is also stupid . she has no n!pples ? or the n!pples are at the bottom of her b00bs ? "
the probem with this sword maiden version is her mouth and eyes are too wide , the art-style makes her look more evil than innocent .
the new artist also fixed this mistake :
- chapter 0.1 : 3 noob adventurers have the money to buy brand-new equipments , ale beers , and delicious foods ?
- chapter 2 : now they only buy ale beers , no expensive foods .
it feels like the new artist read my comment in chapter 0.1 , and they fixed the mistakes that i pointed out , lol : https://mangadex.org/chapter/541723/comments .
i wrote :
" page 33 :
- some random , edgy cosplayer says : you got a good sword .
- wut ? the samurai kid didnt even draw the sword out of the sheath , so how do you know the sword is good or bad ?
OMG , the sorceress 's outfit looks so stupid , and her face is also stupid . she has no n!pples ? or the n!pples are at the bottom of her b00bs ? "
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The art is very detailed, noice but it kinda makes the faces look cold.
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Uh... that art just doesn't agree with me, sorry. It looks like a very weird blend of western and "anime" art, and while I'm sure it's technically amazing... I just don't like it. If it was just a little bit more stylised it could pass for a Darkest Dungeon riff, but it isn't.
EDIT: Ok, on further review, the artist does seem to have a bit of trouble expressing dynamic movement, especially in that scene where Lord confronted the two thugs. Still, I guess I can give it the benefit of a doubt... again.
EDIT: Ok, on further review, the artist does seem to have a bit of trouble expressing dynamic movement, especially in that scene where Lord confronted the two thugs. Still, I guess I can give it the benefit of a doubt... again.
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An artist's understanding of proprtions doesn't change inbetween a draft and the finished page. It's just a new artist - worse at proportions & anatomy.
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I don't think most artists read mangadex comments, as this is pretty much a site pirating ("popularizing") the author's works.
An artist's understanding of proprtions doesn't change inbetween a draft and the finished page. It's just a new artist - worse at proportions & anatomy.
@RARKNAZ
It is the proportions and anatomy that are funny.
@daywithoutgames
I don't think most artists read mangadex comments, as this is pretty much a site pirating ("popularizing") the author's works.
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No action. No characterisation. Apply exposition with a trowel. Add some furry fan service. Add nothing anyone who'd read the earlier series could be surprised by.
Did a necromancer turned the carcass of the earlier dead series into an undead series?
Did a necromancer turned the carcass of the earlier dead series into an undead series?
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