God-level Assassin, I’m the Shadow - Ch. 12

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The exposition in these kinds of works is terrible. He is by himself with knowledge he already has but is giving a soft 4th wall break to explain to us the readers what he already knows and out loud as well. If you have to write it like that you are making things too complicated.

Now this is an in general for this genre but applies to this title as well. It feels like the people that write this really wanted to work on developing video game RPGs but got turned away by developers. When that happened they figured they would try their hand as writing LN/WN or manga/wha/uha. What we end up with are unnecessarily complicated skill systems and pages of blue wall status screens every time the MCs picks up an item or learn a new skill. It would be better if they posted that and any technical stuff at the beginning or end of a chapter and let the chapter itself be story not the game mechanics.
 
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I'd like to say I've read a lot, but this is the first time I've seen any media try to explain how the multiples of 1 works.
 
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Hmm again coincidentally came across a god tier assassin skill again idk about remaining skill but he has the strongest skill called plot armour
 
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Hmm again coincidentally came across a god tier assassin skill again idk about remaining skill but he has the strongest skill called plot armour
This is why I usually don't read manhwa with a game setting. It's usually set up like an incredibly shitty do every thing to hinder the player game but the mc will just run into lucky find one after another.

Now if we went through his journey in his previous life, every thing here would feel more validated but all got to go by is the small pieces he told to set the world building so everything just feels unearned in a kusoge among kusoges.
 

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