Goddess of Lingerie - Ch. 3

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The translation looks good to me. I hope you'll keep doing this manga.
Thank you for translating this! :hearts:
 
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oh yeah, some tiny notes...
  • p2: she says 今日の私は一味(ひとあじ)違うんだから and I had no idea how to make that sound like something someone would actually say in English, but I think it worked out..?
  • p11: Ooguro says まーたご贔屓さん一人ゲットか and I wasn't completely sure how to tl ご贔屓さん in this context... I ended up going with "patron" to play into Ebisu being the "god of good fortune"
  • p12: Ebisu parroting Ooguro in panel 2 is intentional! she uses the exact same wording as Ooguro did just before in p11, so it has a teasing tone to it. I think it's cute. they come off like they've been friends for a long time, I wonder if that's true...
btw, the "god of fortune" thing is probably a play on Ebisu sharing her name with one of the Seven gods of Fortune
Ebisu uses "watakushi" as her personal pronoun, and the designer woman is 29 years old! (it was mentioned in ch1, but not tl'ed. I... can't seem to actually find her name in ch1-3...?! Ebisu just calls her okyaku-sama!!)
:wooow:
 
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