thank you for the comment. unfortunately, English is not our native language. any suggestions are welcomedThank you for the chapter! Grammar could use a bit of work, but it's understandable.
If you could get a native English speaker as a proofreader, that would certainly help. Again though, even now it was at least still understandable and I'm just happy this is getting updated.thank you for the comment. unfortunately, English is not our native language. any suggestions are welcomed![]()
Unless it's one of those barriers where you go by the road, and return to the same place.If you're on a road, you don't need to place marks like that.
MC doesn't seem to be the kind of person who challenges all strong-looking people he encounters to duels.MC should challenge that woman to a friendly duel. The worst that could happen is to be stuffed into a barrel.
The distance he walked through the forest is a bit long for that. If he can't find the part of the road where he entered it originally, he wouldn't be able to find his way through the forest backwards.Also, the mark would help him return back to the cave, should he need to.