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Mimi is an endless barrel of exposition.
"A slightly clumsy book-loving" girl seems a bit redundant considering most manga. "Book-loving" tends to mean "less social", which in turn means "socially awkward".
Seems odd that he's narrating about getting tipsy and wandering around, while showing him planning a search with the rest of them.
He found the One Ring. But instead of making you invisible, it summons a maid ghost. And one maid has been mentioned, implied to be dead or soon dead.
30 metres is a distance, but for a hallway that large it's not weird.
"A slightly clumsy book-loving" girl seems a bit redundant considering most manga. "Book-loving" tends to mean "less social", which in turn means "socially awkward".
I have questions about how that's expressed. If they're talking about killing, "sometimes" is off, but if it's just shedding or things breaking off, hide and meat isn't exactly on the menu there."They sometimes drop their fangs, hide, scales, and even meat."
Seems odd that he's narrating about getting tipsy and wandering around, while showing him planning a search with the rest of them.
He found the One Ring. But instead of making you invisible, it summons a maid ghost. And one maid has been mentioned, implied to be dead or soon dead.
30 metres is a distance, but for a hallway that large it's not weird.