Gomi Ika da to Tsuihou Sareta Shiyounin, Jitsu wa Zense Kenja desu ~Shijou Saikyou no Kenja, Sekai Saikouhou no Gakuen ni Kayou~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 5.3

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See, not gonna lie, this is the somewhat serviceable swerve that could make this less dumb, and gives my curiosity enough push to keep reaching into this metaphorical bag of stale potato chips... but given the initial concept and execution, I am hella doubtful this author even knows where the fuck they're driving this narrative vehicle. Maybe to a cliff, they drove down one already, another would at least be funnier than whatever the heck this is.
The way you write is so beautiful it has this poetic or significant feeling too it.
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The way you write is so beautiful it has this poetic or significant feeling too it.
This is unrelated to the comment btw
I've been told I write like an overly-descriptive purple-prose-choking author before. Years of tabletop DMing do that to you, I guess. :dogkek:
 
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That school is inhumane, there is no way any noble family would tolerate their kid living in that trash shed just because they lost in a ranking duel.
 
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Memory foam bed... Does the author think even for two seconds what he's writing? Oh, what am I asking? Of course he doesn't.
 

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