GraPara! - Vol. 14 Ch. 136 - Grapara!

[shinya78]

I hate to burst your bubble, but the chapter clearly shows that Luna is already very experienced... she mentions that she would have liked to have sex with the MC (which clearly shows that she's no longer a virgin), and the most compelling proof is that she also mentions that it's been a long time since anyone sucked her breasts... the hotel thing was pure bait since she left as soon as she got to the room, the guy texts her asking why she hid as soon as he arrived and if they could see each other again, and Luna immediately blocks him

Aight, I'm going to have to stop you right there and make some corrections.

she mentions that she would have liked to have sex with the MC

Wrong - Nowhere in the dialogue did she mentioned wanting to have sex with the MC - She only mentions [doing it with Naoto was something that she didn't think she would be doing]. [She also merely stated the fact that they did not go all the way], that [they only went as far as rubbing each other]. Luna asking herself what would've happened to her if they went a little further does not equate to her wanting for them to go all the way, [it was merely a question of "what if?"].

compelling proof is that she also mentions that it's been a long time since anyone sucked her breasts

Partially wrong - Nowhere in the dialogue did she mentioned that it's been a long time since someone sucked her breast specifically. - [What is only sure is that it has been some time since her breasts had some form of stimulation]. [Whether it was caused by someone else or by herself was not explicitly mentioned], but since there were no signs of her masturbating during the time they set their schedule (Monday night, as Luna's phone was showing Tuesday 14:19[12:19PM] the next day) up until Friday, assuming that Luna used the app a day before the meeting, then Chapter 24.2 would have been on a Sunday, when she WAS masturbating and stimulating her nipples. [It would have been almost a week since "the last time" her breast had been stimulated.]

the guy texts her asking why she hid as soon as he arrived

Wrong - Nowhere in the dialogue did it mention her HIDING when the other person arrived. - The texts read as following:
Luna: I'm sorry, after you came all the way (to meet up), (I) ended up going home immediately.
Anon Guy: No worries? We could just re-schedule... When are you free?
[TODAY]
Anon Guy: How about this Friday?
Then Luna just blocks the guy.

 

[erintesden]

Funny stuff, checked the Quirk Girl artist Twitter and unlike last time, it seems now comments are fully disabled everywhere. You can't comment, not even in the older posts, it seems...
Wonder if the aurhor really will keep risking his/her ass with the NTR bair or finally come clean soon...

 

[Cross-21-]

Funny stuff, checked the Quirk Girl artist Twitter and unlike last time, it seems now comments are fully disabled everywhere. You can't comment, not even in the older posts, it seems...
Wonder if the aurhor really will keep risking his/her ass with the NTR bair or finally come clean soon...

Man these bait artists never learn... It's like they want the hate, but then in the end they can't handle even 10% of it

 

[jonasadan]

Funny stuff, checked the Quirk Girl artist Twitter and unlike last time, it seems now comments are fully disabled everywhere. You can't comment, not even in the older posts, it seems...
Wonder if the aurhor really will keep risking his/her ass with the NTR bair or finally come clean soon...

Idk, I think in my opinion what he/she did was good, I don't understand why Airi didn't do that.

 

[box2024]

Idk, I think in my opinion what he/she did was good, I don't understand why Airi didn't do that.

Well Arir is all for netorare that's why it's her fetish and her niche as an artist and writer. Granted in grapara it was abrupt and really unnecessary added nothing to the story and was well uneventful. The more you think about it the less of a point it makes.

Quirky girl is at best a( I liked her first sort of ntr) I expect more drama but not for things to go completely off the rails.

 

[erintesden]

Quirky girl is at best a( I liked her first sort of ntr) I expect more drama but not for things to go completely off the rails.

Just curious,you are referring to quirky girl in itself or another manga from the author when you say first sort of NTR.
It was funny for me to discover that one of my first and favorite Yuri series was made by the author.

 

[box2024]

Just curious,you are referring to quirky girl in itself or another manga from the author when you say first sort of NTR.
It was funny for me to discover that one of my first and favorite Yuri series was made by the author.

Im referring to a quirky girl takes me to bed yes it's the ( I liked her first type of ntr) granted I think she will be the end girl because she remove's anyone from her life that gets in-between her and natso. So he has to fuck up I expect some drama from someone showing up who has in fact been intamint with Luna and natso getting jealous and misunderstanding the situation at some point.

 

[erintesden]

Im referring to a quirky girl takes me to bed yes it's the ( I liked her first type of ntr) granted I think she will be the end girl because she remove's anyone from her life that gets in-between her and natso. So he has to fuck up I expect some drama from someone showing up who has in fact been intamint with Luna and natso getting jealous and misunderstanding the situation at some point.

You are reminding me of another thing I dislike about this manga.
That Luna is technically not the only girl, but the author seems to forget it...
We have the lustful (50/50 chance of virgin) fanged nerdy girl, who's my favorite over Luna.
There's the tattoo chick, who contrasts nicely having a completely landmine vibe while also having the most delicate build compared with the other girls that are more voluptuous... We don't know much about her yet, though.
And there's that Gyaru girl who already has a bunch of points just for being a Ganguro, and unlike Luna, this one is confirmed to be a real deal slut.
So yeah, most of these girls can be interesting, but Luna is clearly the designated winner so the author doesn't seem to bother much with the others. It reminds me of Kanokari, in that sense...

 

[box2024]

You are reminding me of another thing I dislike about this manga.
Luna is technically not the only girl,
We have the lustful (50/50 chance of virgin) fanged nerdy girl, who's my favorite over Luna.
There's the tattoo chick, who contrasts nicely having a completely landmine vibe while also having the most delicate build compared with the other girls that are more voluptuous... We don't know much about her yet, though.
And there's that Gyaru girl who already has a bunch of points just for being a Ganguro, and unlike Luna, this one is confirmed to be a real deal slut.
So yeah, most of these girls can be interesting, but Luna is on loudly the designer winner so the author doesn't seem to bother much with them. It reminds me of Kanokari...

Well I expect there to be some sort of drama between Luna and the other two with natso but not so much with hiba since she knows Luna well enough to know how much natso means to Luna granted she will almost certainly tease at some point in the story. I wonder how much longer things will go since I don't think the author intended to go this long?

 

[erintesden]

I wonder how much longer things will go since I don't think the author intended to go this long?

Kinda the opposite though?
With just Luna, the plot only had potential for a handful of volumes, maybe even just a couple. But the story introduced that old picture with the characters when they were younger and since then we have been introduced the other girls in the present (not sure if we have all them or if there's still any pending to debut?).
And on top of that, the author introduced the whole concept of the 10 secrets when it seemed Luna plot was going to be solved, so now the story could continue as much as the author wants it to do. The only problem is if he can keep the attention and patience if readers from running out. And I feel like that's not the case.

 

[master-34]

Kinda the opposite though?
With just Luna, the plot only had potential for a handful of volumes, maybe even just a couple. But the story introduced that old picture with the characters when they were younger and since then we have been introduced the other girls in the present (not sure if we have all them or if there's still any pending to debut?).
And on top of that, the author introduced the whole concept of the 10 secrets when it seemed Luna plot was going to be solved, so now the story could continue as much as the author wants it to do. The only problem is if he can keep the attention and patience if readers from running out. And I feel like that's not the case.

You think the author is trying to get the same number of chapters as rent a girlfriend

 

[erintesden]

You think the author is trying to get the same number of chapters as rent a girlfriend

Lol, I hope not.
Kanokari is bullshit but even there the cuck shit is just occasional stuff on Kazuya delusions.
Here the plot is all about that topic.
It would be as if Kanokari whole plot focused on Kazuya suspecting Chizuru sleeps around with her clients for extra money with constant baits form the author about it maybe being the truth.
Even the readers of Kanokari would have jumped the ship if the author had went that route.
But yeah, author definitely is trying to milk the cow dry or he/she would have pushed the couple closer that one time instead of introducing the 10 secrets bullshit.
I just hope the author isn't dumb enough to believe they can continue with the bait for hundred of chapters.

 

[master-34]

Lol, I hope not.
Kanokari is bullshit but even there the cuck shit is just occasional stuff on Kazuya delusions.
Here the plot is all about that topic.
It would be as if Kanokari whole plot focused on Kazuya suspecting Chizuru sleeps around with her clients for extra money with constant baits form the author about it maybe being the truth.
Even the readers of Kanokari would have jumped the ship if the author had went that route.
But yeah, author definitely is trying to milk the cow dry or he/she would have pushed the couple closer that one time instead of introducing the 10 secrets bullshit.
I just hope the author isn't dumb enough to believe they can continue with the bait for hundred of chapters.

Do you think the 10 secrets plot line would have been better if it was about a other character?

 

[whorainzoneeee]

Lol, I hope not.
Kanokari is bullshit but even there the cuck shit is just occasional stuff on Kazuya delusions.
Here the plot is all about that topic.
It would be as if Kanokari whole plot focused on Kazuya suspecting Chizuru sleeps around with her clients for extra money with constant baits form the author about it maybe being the truth.
Even the readers of Kanokari would have jumped the ship if the author had went that route.
But yeah, author definitely is trying to milk the cow dry or he/she would have pushed the couple closer that one time instead of introducing the 10 secrets bullshit.
I just hope the author isn't dumb enough to believe they can continue with the bait for hundred of chapters.

She can stretch it out as long as she wants but lets see how long she can go on without comments on her socials.. she turned them off but if she turns them on a flute of hate will appear.
Going with more baits would be a dumb move because didnt nao already said that he DOESNT want her to be with other man? didnt he already confessed his love? if she still go out with other man than by any means i dont know in which direction this story will go. Just stupid ntr plots.

 

[erintesden]

Do you think the 10 secrets plot line would have been better if it was about a other character?

In a different manga, maybe.
By itself it would make a decent plot for a romcom.
Guy meets and likes girl who seems to like him back, but when he confess she rejects her under the excuse that he doesn't know the type of person she really is. So he asks for a chance to get to know her better, nd then she gives it, telling him that she has 10 secrets and he may date her if he manages to accept her even after learning about them all.
...It's not a bad setting at all, and it would bring room to speak about more mature themes (maybe this girl was victim of abuse, or did bad stuff that hurt other people like bullying or cheating or even murder.) or they could outright switch genres (maybe one of secrets is that the girl isn't human but some sort of creature, alien, etc). So you see, this plot has potential.
in fact, maybe Quirky girl would better if it had started directly like this. But no, we went a long while and Luna only brought the secrets when it seemed everything was about to work out fine. So it feels just like an excuse for the author to not finish the damn story.

 

[erintesden]

She can stretch it out as long as she wants but lets see how long she can go on without comments on her socials.. she turned them off but if she turns them on a flute of hate will appear.
Going with more baits would be a dumb move because didnt nao already said that he DOESNT want her to be with other man? didnt he already confessed his love? if she still go out with other man than by any means i dont know in which direction this story will go. Just stupid ntr plots.

Yeah, and the author already has too many shit to explain...
I get why Luna would be scared of dating MC and maybe ruining the platonic relationship she has with him... But that one is already ruined on Nao's side.
He sees her as a woman, loves her, and wants to be intimate with her. She can say no to him, and try to keep the status quo, but that won't change the fact Nao is not a kid that sees her with purely innocent eyes. Not anymore.
And to be so cowardly that she prefers to try and sleep with other men rather than accept her feelings for him... The author needs to give us a very good explanation about what happened in her past that generated such s trauma or complex in her to make her think so stupidly about something so simple as "he likes you, you like him, you are both adults, go kiss and fuck each other."

 

[diphuc1]

I suppose on the plus side we will get something to be angry about in November. Well that's if someone posts it.

One last ragebait for the road. Some epilogue plus where we get Sakura Shinobu actually talking outside of their work would be cool I guess, but an extension of the infamous chapter would bring a lot more engagement from both sides.

Although 129.5 would be a choice of all time considering Sakura ended up going separate ways from fucboi because of her decision in the end. Unless they're still together and Sakura walking around wearing Shinobu's necklace is just Airi's idea of a sick joke.

 

[box2024]

One last ragebait for the road. Some epilogue plus where we get Sakura Shinobu actually talking outside of their work would be cool I guess, but an extension of the infamous chapter would bring a lot more engagement from both sides.

Although 129.5 would be a choice of all time considering Sakura ended up going separate ways from fucboi because of her decision in the end. Unless they're still together and Sakura walking around wearing Shinobu's necklace is just Airi's idea of a sick joke.

Well according to that comment that's happening yep more fuckboi X Sakura because that's what was missing from the story oh fuck that's just misery porn. Any who finding out more of what sakura was doing during the blank years what she did after finding out shinobu never cheated on her and what happened after they filed that ( porno ) should at least be interesting if someone posts it when it come out.

 

[diphuc1]

Well according to that comment that's happening yep more fuckboi X Sakura because that's what was missing from the story oh fuck that's just misery porn. Any who finding out more of what sakura was doing during the blank years what she did after finding out shinobu never cheated on her and what happened after they filed that ( porno ) should at least be interesting if someone posts it when it come out.

The TL didn't make it too clear, but I think that JP comment was just listing all the possibilities and then wondering which choice Airi will make.

It is true though that a ch 129.5 could have a more positive impact on the sales, maybe even more than some wholesome epilogue+ or RyuseiXChico bonus. Much as I like Mio, a bonus for her here would be too random, at least keep the Chico trend going.

 

[box2024]

The TL didn't make it too clear, but I think that JP comment was just listing all the possibilities and then wondering which choice Airi will make.

It is true though that a ch 129.5 could have a more positive impact on the sales, maybe even more than some wholesome epilogue+ or RyuseiXChico bonus. Much as I like Mio, a bonus for her here would be too random, at least keep the Chico trend going.

It's hard to tell but what we know for sure is there we'll be 17 new padges. That's not a full chapter well it almost is but no way Arir resist's more fuckboi x Sakura content.



I just noticed this but shionbu become's famous for his sex scenes in movies for how real and intense he depicts them Sakura becomes famous as an actress for well basically the same thing kinda odd their paths didn't cross again for so long huh she must have been avoiding him specifically.