Hacking Ghost: Karada ni Shika Kachi no Nai Gakuen - Ch. 40 - Kuroki Misaki

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Tremendous improvement!

I’ll make another suggestion. Your TL Notes, were really TL comments. I would suggest you reserve all comments to your credit page or the comment section. And keep TL notes and SFX neutral in tone.

Example
TL Note: Chuhai is a fruity alcoholic drink (neutral)
TL Note: If you get drunk on Chuhai you’ll be sick as fuck! (opinion)
 
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Looks like we are reaching the end of the arc huh
i wonder if the mc is gonna "recruit" only the fighter girl and the slit eyed girl or everyone from the student council
 
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well that punch to the stomach.. freaking ouch. but ironical that kind of punch can backfire. because it almost always causes the victim to BARF on the attacker.. OR if they did manage to tight their stomach muscles in time to lesser the damage and hurting the hand.
 
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When comparing the 2 chapters you scanlated, you can see quite the impressive improvement ngl. And the reading was smooth and didn't force me to auto-correct translate in my head in both of three chapters. Imma say it's really good.
 
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The abilities in this manga are all over the place. At one point they said that the ability is fixed for the body and not related to the soul, but different ghosts give different abilities to the bangles, and one bangle can house various abilities.
 
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Tremendous improvement!

I’ll make another suggestion. Your TL Notes, were really TL comments. I would suggest you reserve all comments to your credit page or the comment section. And keep TL notes and SFX neutral in tone.

Example
TL Note: Chuhai is a fruity alcoholic drink (neutral)
TL Note: If you get drunk on Chuhai you’ll be sick as fuck! (opinion)
Do switch back to the previous font,Comic Sans and its' similar styles are quite boring,otherwise,keep up the good job.

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