You have a habit of not centering the text, not sure if this is intentionally or not but all text in any bubble or box should be centered. You also need to correct your line spacing, hopefully this is not intentional either. Lastly, still need proofreading or more eyes to check the misspelled stuff.
I love the way the author told the storyline and comedy punchline. It is the same as Kaguya-sama and i really like this kind of story. Can't wait for next chapter 😬