Hajirau Kimi ga Mitainda - Ch. 74.2 - Magical Reflexology Touka-chan

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For this to be NTR, readers should actually care about the stolen girl. At this point i don't think anyone would care if the sister got ugly-bastarded. Would be a welcomed outcome even.
yeah, with that personality I can see that she's a bomb ready to explode, gonna ruin someone's life and sinking all the ships, chances are no one gets with anyone
 
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honestly i wouldn't care. not that i'd want him to pull a J*mmy on her, but this whole plotline is 100% unnecessary and a turn off for me.
now we are talking about plot, introducing a character with stinker personality is a quick way to extend the story line imo, in short by adding conflicts, however, the motive and the thinking process is a bit forced tho, no way a person as brainless as this her irl, or is there
 
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For this to be NTR, readers should actually care about the stolen girl. At this point i don't think anyone would care if the sister got ugly-bastarded. Would be a welcomed outcome even.

I think the concern would be more that Kaho the younger sister to be pulled into this and have bad things happen to her because of her older sister. The UB might be in such a rage that he mistakes Kaho for Touka and then bad things ensue.

Hopefully that doesn't happen, but who knows with the author.
 
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I can't shake the feeling that Umagome's written herself into a bit of a corner here. I can tell she LIKES to draw and write Touka. She's vibrant on the page, her actions, expressions, and whole deal are just full of life and energy. I've liked to watch her this whole arc; she's this blend of oblivious, mean, lovestruck and horny that's just fun to follow visually. Like ignore what's said this chapter and just watch her, she's a blast, going from licking her lips to having a :3 face, applying pressure by looking away and saying she just won't do the project, then the desperate and pleading expression and action on page 10... to being mean and oblivious. She has a wide range and fun reactions, and I can only imagine that she's a blast to write because she's both forceful and dumb, clever enough to think of plans but never quite clever enough to fully pull them off.

But, Touka's place in the story is strange. It always has been. We've never gotten a handle on her motivations, probably because she just doesn't have solid ones. She's impulsive, with her only real long-term motivation being a resentment of her sister that we don't quite understand yet. Whatever it is, its also key to Kaho's character, so we've been dodging it until Umagome thinks the story wants to tackle it. But that means we're mostly flying blind with an impulsive character at the wheel. Also, she's... an adult. I don't think she's that much older than Kaho and Shirasawa, but she's old enough that what she's doing is technically an objective form of fucked up and skeezy.

I figured we'd take this turn by ignoring the setup Touka got with her freaky and terrible nerd club guys who deserve death, but now that's coming to a head with a deranged ugly bastard stalker. Cause it seemed like that was setting up a strange comfort with being molested, only for that to vanish. Hell, even the most important thing, that she'd be ignoring the smell of all the dudes' jizz, got ignored because she got WILDLY turned on by used tissues in Shirasawa's house!

I don't really know where all this can even head at this point. I thought we finally had a direction after Kaho's proposal, only to swerve into a plot point I figured we had to ignore for things to move forward. I feel like this has just ended up trapping the plot in an inescapable morass with no real path out without huge obstacles.
 
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God damn she became a semen demon for him & just casually gropes him without a care in the world. Really hope that incel doesn't confuse Touka for Kaho when he decides to go to their house. Thanks for the translations.
DON'T YOU PUT THAT EVIL ON US, RICKY BOBBY!
 
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I wonder if the crazy guy will get caught cuz he was accidentally filmed Grapping Her?
 
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I read the first couple chapters of this and dropped it didn't feel like reading it. Has this shit good enough to reread it or is it drama heavy(like real heavy and is their even romance)
It's been off the main plot for awhile. I'd recommend waiting more to see if it can recover or if it's going to drag the ecchi drama nonsense out forever.
 
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Alrighty, I feel like Touka > Kaho is getting there for me. Slowly but surely.
She's way too fucking great.
I just hope nothing too serious happens with the creepy dude, and it it does, it'll be a in a non-canon doujin.
Thanks for the chapter!
 

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