Hakanage-san wa Nikushoku ni Naritai - Oneshot

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I can already see the complaints about glacial progress if it got serialized...
Going with the misunderstanding angle sounds meh. Perhaps a better story would be role reversal, where her strength lets her look after him, or slapstick comedy where she wants to be protected as old times but freakish strength as a side effect of experimental treatment causes all sorts of mayhem.
 
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The idea is nice.
But you either had to make the MC an absolute idiot for not noticing it, making the class not telling the MC for some reason, or make the heroine failed to show that she is actually healthy, for each chapter. It's hard to expand it beyond a few chapter.
 
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Did.. how the hell a high school boy casually lifted 20kg plushie?? Even as an adult man, I still need to put an effort to lift 20kg barbel. :dogewow:
And holy shit girl, ripping a blanket like ripping a tissue?? You will pay for that blanket. :pout:
 

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