Hana to Hina wa Houkago - Vol. 3 Ch. 19

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Im real happy with these ending and how they were able to really connect at the end and im especially happy cuz Hina was finally able to let go and be herself, but i must say it took a long ass time i really feel like Moringa-sensei kept her hostage ever since she found out and accepted her feelings and then when she confessed she was given a breather but then shackled again till here in the very end, id have liked to see a lot more of her acting unrestrained and free like she did here ..._

Stilllike Generika said while it was indeed a very by the books story with not all that time i really enjoyed my time reading it, not enough time with the girls together in other places besides the shop, way too much time with the shop stuff and the cute dolls useless stuff, would have liked more of an impact from the friends as well, but again still good.

Not on the level of Girlfriends but still an enjoyable read id have liked more of a focus on Hina and more chaps with her but Hana really grew on me by the end, quite liked them both, a solid yuri.

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I thank the translation team for picking this one up! It gave me all yhe feels 😊😊😊 Sooooo cuuuuuute😍😍😍😍😍
 
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I really love the premise of this chapter but feel it was poorly written. Maybe it was just the translation but it all seemed very rushed. Should have been at least two chapters long I think. I love the whole public coming out thing as I've never seen that done in any other Yuri but again, feel like it was just very rushed and not explained very well. I feel if it was just a bit longer and slightly better written this could have been one of the absolute best chapters of any Yuri I've ever read. All in all though I did love this story
 

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