Hantsu x Trash - Vol. 15 Ch. 154

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HAHAHAHHNA SQUIGGLES I ALREADY BOUGHT It though now I can't afford my Tamaki Figurine thats about $129.99
 
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Hasn't not even been like a week yet in story timeline - maybe Yousei needs to take a break from dating for a bit
 
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This shit is so forced, reading it is painful... there isn't even much fan service anymore....
 
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To the people saying the story is forced, has no development, etc... : shut up ! If u dont like it, just dont read it ! ALSO, this isnt forced. I know some people that are EXACTLY like this. Some people never experienced love and their personality is just messy so they need more time to do something. I saw this happening a lot, so stop commenting garbage :p
 
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He, Shinozaki is more invested into the budding relationship than both parties.
 
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@SquigglesJP there is obviously no proofreader or quality checking for this series. On page 1, what is "Otto" supposed to be? Some auto correcting or did the teacher give a nickname the character Chisato? I can ignore that you also don't translate the word oppai to boobs on that page as well. But why on the last page is there "Ttaku" and "Yoshi"? What makes you put the "un" on page 2 and 4? What was there in that panel in 15, just a sound effect? Are you running any of these pages by another person to check if anything seems awkward the way it's phrased? Picking "aren't you both in love" or "aren't the two of you in love with each other" would flow better. The both of you with each other is redundant, it conveys the meaning that the feeling is mutual twice. The raw quality is just okay and there is clearly no cleaner, and you only put punctuation after a question (?) or exclamation (!) and it sticks out. Send a private message to a scan group you like and say "hey not looking for help on any projects but got any advice you can give" because this is the quality of scanlations we had 15 years ago.
 

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