First episode was great. The main character (actually closer to a secondary character) Is fairly complex, and I really enjoyed his development. However, Ifeel like the whole "real life" part and zero's whole shtick were unnecessary. It did not really bring anything to the table.
It could have ended there. Dark isnt interesting at all. Sora would have been more interesting to follow. Second chapter is too much like DBZ, long drawn out battles of godtier beeings randomly getting buffs. However it has its moments zombie stone for instance, Lazie"s death, the evil dragon giving Sora his tail
I'd rather read something about Yopi's early years, or HLW. Those are the main focus point of a few chapters, however they deserve a full spin off.
For a semi-distopian reality, it did pretty well. I'm looking forward to what the author has in the works f
