You're doing really well for an MTL!
The font/typesetting, the proofreading, the command of idiom... it's a good translation, ad far as I can tell!
Great job!
I do wonder, and it's absolutely NOT just this manga, but...
Is there a requirement that less than 10 pages requires at least 5 pages of upload group pages?
Cos this is Not the only manga grpup that seems to do this.
I see "Page: 1/15" and then the first 2-3 pages are warnings and group advertisements, and the last 3-4 pages are more of the same!
Like, every time it's 6 or 8 pages of story, and 4 to 7 pages of group stuff....