Harten - Ch. 1 - Babysitting

[BCS]

Weird mix of shota face and ripped body

 

[HelioCesar]

I believe i am witnessing peak being conceived.

 

[Ta123]

Enough to make a grown man cry

 

[Astromarine]

The high level of detail and the way the backgrounds almost blend into watercolors makes me think of Tsukushi of Made in Abyss.

can't be, the girl is clothed.

 

[anonymousthief]

Terrific art. Anyone have spoilers from the original novel or whatever it is?

Shame about the elf MILF. The world needs more elf MILFs.

 

[anonymousthief]

pretty good so far but i can already smell the human male x elf female pairing from a mile away and it's already ruining the experience for me.

Maybe if the MILF had survived. But Arywin is way too young for him.

 

[Elfteiroh]

I am unreasonably annoyed that seven was skipped when he counted to ten.

No, it is perfectly reasonable. I was ticked too. XD I reread the page 4 times to make sure. XD

 

[kaylani]

I read this on the artists Twitter before, I guess it doesn't really matter but the detail that arwyn doesn't know her name properly and pronounces it awy, and haten has the receptionist record her name that way was lost here. It's probably not actually important but it was there.

 

[Rengar]

Amazing art

 

[Statyc]

No, it is perfectly reasonable. I was ticked too. XD I reread the page 4 times to make sure. XD

Same!

 

[Injaa]

This seems promising, but if Haten and Arwyn get together I'm dropping it and giving it 1 star.
I've been burned to many times

 

[cockmeat]

Kill em all Harten, kill em all.

 

[Cyromantik]

Oh goodness this is drawn to beautifully!!! I love the unique style. I feel like the artist has equal potential for the cute and the grotesque, what a rare and wonderful duality

 

[Cyromantik]

This seems promising, but if Haten and Arwyn get together I'm dropping it and giving it 1 star.
I've been burned to many times

On the optimistic side, if her maturation rate follows with usual fantasy elves and fae-touched, by the time Arwyn's old enough to start looking for romantic partners, Haten'll have died a natural death

 

[Tomas28]

This feels like peak, my heartstrings were tugged in such a way, and everything transitioned so beautifully and brutally at the same time. I'll stick around for as long as needed to keep reading this stuff.

 

[Zero13]

People here wanking the art somehow and im just stunned how the heads dont fit the bodys one bit. Hatens body looks like hes 50, but his face says 8. Reminds me of Machio naruzo from dumbbells

For a main character design thats horrid unless its a shitty comedy show like how heavy are the dumbbells you lift.

Guy also teleported right to the closet 3 seconds after the girl was put in and the mom killed without killing a single of the goblins right at the door. Least have her be stuck there for a few hours undetected for it to make at least a little bit of sense.

 

[Encyclopedium]

Yo did you see the hag lines under the elf mother's eyes? Hot.

But damn RIP mom...you did your best. If he was a little faster or she a little stronger..maybe mom's would still be there

Wait this is Navigavi? Yoooo

 

[AnonymousContributor]

I hope there won't raise moral concerns over killing goblin children (annihilate every one) if the goblins aren't intelligent enough but if they are then remember that it didn't happen and if it did the goblins deserved it

 

[Riverstyx1]

lol they skipped the seven

 

[Bobdillan69]