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P Pepperpots1 Joined Jan 20, 2018 Messages 4 Dec 26, 2018 #2 Its a great read but I think maybe proof reading needs some work.?
beleth Member Joined Jan 31, 2018 Messages 190 Dec 30, 2018 #3 reasonably cute and decently written, as long as you're good at correcting grammar errors in your head
reasonably cute and decently written, as long as you're good at correcting grammar errors in your head
K KingMab Aggregator gang Joined Oct 16, 2018 Messages 199 Dec 31, 2018 #4 Really cute with some grammar errors but my mind just kind of skipped over it all lol
F firanzia_vice Joined Oct 13, 2020 Messages 1 Oct 23, 2020 #6 the grammer isn't perfect, but this is a really good story.