Hatsu Kano, Hatsu Kare, Hatsu Ren'ai - Oneshot

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On one hand, peak. On the other hand, Boo. Let her keep the tracksuits. Stop diminishing cute tomboys.
I agree but also maybe she wanted to be girly but felt boxed in by the tomboy label. Either way as long as they're happy
 
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Tall girl x short guy always hits :thumbsup:

Decent start, but even disregarding the need to respect the tropes it felt a little...rushed? Maybe it was because the art felt a little busy and that bled into the storytelling too. Not saying its bad, as I think the author would do well with a bit more space to tell the story.
 

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