Hatsukoi Omoidashitara Kisu Shiyo?

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Suffers a bit from trying to do a lot in relatively few chapters, while keeping the storytelling itself at a fairly relaxed pace. It feels like it needed just a bit more space to sprawl into, ideally.

Generally I liked it, though. The comfy parts are comfy, even if there aren't as many of them as I'd like in proportion to the drama.
 
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soft enough to balance out the kind of angst that was there. overall fairly good. the fluff was good and the story was interesting. not too cliched.
 

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