Hazure Skill Nendouryoku (Tadashi Level MAX) de Musou suru - Te wo Kazasu Dake desu. Eishou to ka Hissatsu Waza to ka Irimasen. Nenjiru Dake de Taose…

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Dam I'm disapointed they could have done that so much better he just wakes up gets up and Immediately goes to fight.
Here's what should have happend

He wakes up, he doesn't move his body, looks around for a sec, she walks in and sees he's awake, they hug and cry, realizes he can move because he sat up to hug, they calm down and make up, she explains what happened while asleep, he explains what happen to himself while asleep to her, he gets up and stretches, heres loud bang and looks out window, sees the fight and he looks back at her, she hesitantly nods in agreement, he goes to fight.

There he's now not a battle junky and it's a lot more impactful
 
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Excuse excuse.
 
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Why a lot of those authors are so willing to make food out of orcs (which are humanoids with enough intelligence to wear clothes)
 
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Dam I'm disapointed they could have done that so much better he just wakes up gets up and Immediately goes to fight.
Here's what should have happend

He wakes up, he doesn't move his body, looks around for a sec, she walks in and sees he's awake, they hug and cry, realizes he can move because he sat up to hug, they calm down and make up, she explains what happened while asleep, he explains what happen to himself while asleep to her, he gets up and stretches, heres loud bang and looks out window, sees the fight and he looks back at her, she hesitantly nods in agreement, he goes to fight.

There he's now not a battle junky and it's a lot more impactful
Or he might actually use his telekinesis to move his body and might actually have to suffer in his first real fight as he slowly gets his bearings! Make the protag actually work for it a bit and use his powers in novel ways!

Holy shit guys we're spinning gold here!
 

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Idk, going against a noble family as a commoner is not a good idea unless you're prepared to leave the country :nyoron:
 
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Hmm his skill doesn't seem that op. He'd get easily taken down just by poison which doesn't even require a skill to use
 
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What... what the hell were those two thousand years for? Are we really supposed to believe that it takes the amount of time Rory gaurded Amy to do the bare minimum we see other fictional characters do with telekinesis? Like had the story even taken the smallest amount of time to establish why telekinesis was so difficult to train up or the magic system that held it back (probably by the goddess herself), I could give some benefit of the doubt, but no... so we just have our own understanding of telekinesis to go off of (and partly the lack of explanation says we should just understand telekinesis with outside knowledge) all of which calls BS on this nonsense. Idk why or when pointlessly long vigils became "cool", but this is just dumb. Also I don't know, I guess it's a loved one and you do you, but if there was a warm dead body that refused to decompose in my house, I'd burn it within the month (really week).
 
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Wow, this is straight up garbage :shamihuh:

So for the sake of keeping his promise, he let Emma wait for him six years, constantly wondering whether he'll ever wake up and needing to take care of him? Dude has some really fucked up priorities. His pathetic pride was more important to him than Emma's feelings and six years of his life.
 

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