Heavenly Jewel Master

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Hopefully some group catch this up and continue the chapters :)
We can only wait for that tho XD
 
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Everyone talking about rape but I didn't see none of that jet
Mc is dedicated to only one waifu for now and it's almost cute when you forget his creep/pervert behavior (pictured as him being playful :sick:) towards other women.
I mean the relationship between men and women in a wuxia novel is almost always stereotyped crazy, if you read this type of stuff then this story is actually way better than most (for now again).

However you can clearly see that the plot is really made convenient sometimes and not refined. I guess good writing isn't always necessary every corner of the story if you just want to publish something.

Art coud be better but it's alright if you like the story.

A solid 7. If the artstyle were to get better I would maybe rate 8 but it wouldn't be possible to go higher.
 

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