help me :((

[Nhatizdabezt]

I posted a Vietnamese translation of a one-shot, but I didn't notice that I made a texting mistake, and I've already posted it. I've since uploaded a second version with the errors corrected. I kindly ask the admin to approve the second post for me.
Title: Yandere na Osananajimi
Language: Vietnamese

 

[AliceShiro]

The incorrect one has already been rejected. If there's a mistake in your chapter, you can edit the pages by clicking the pen icon.