Hen na Ryuu to Moto Yuusha Party Zatsuyougakari, Shintairiku de Nonbiri Slow Life - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.1

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This is kinda nice. A story after the "happily ever after."
Ha! As if! There is no happily ever after. Life always goes on after that.
 
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This is look nice so far, but am I the only one who is sick of the way these "skills" are presented in these fantasy worlds?
They're just random gifts from god that require (ironically) no skill -
"Oh how did you make that sweet sword?"
"Ah, I just have this blacksmith making skill"

It gives this weird impression of nothing really being earned by the MC, but also seems to say that if you don't have the right "talent" you should just give up. Even in stories where people supposedly have "bad" skills, it often turns out their skills are in fact superior to everyone else's, which really just reinforces that the prejudices of that world were in fact correct.
 
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Its refreshing to see the MC with so-called "Useless" skill ( at least according to other "weakest" and/or "geting fired from xxx" story) get a recognize for how useful of his skill right at the beginning for once.
 
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We've got some questionable TS in the first part, but that's about where it's at so not really a problem.
Readable despite a couple of grammatical & spelling errors.
Biggest issues besides that would be the lack of cleaning/redrawing. Putting text over text makes it that much harder to read.

Overall, decent enough job. Would recommend a PR and RD.
 
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A hero's party with people that acknowledge the importance of the MC's role for once, nice
 
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no way, a person who leaves the hero's party on good terms? where the hell was that on the script.
but yea, this is a pretty nice change of pace for once. the guy has his weaknesses and strengths and other people actually see and make use of him and not just kicked for pure ignorance
 

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