Henshin Ganbou! - Oneshot

[Conser1]

After reading so much manga, this one makes me think something completely different is going on.

My headcanon is that the gyaru is a bit of a yandere/has a crush on him, saw the MC put the letter in the other girl's locker, stole it, and lied to the MC. The other girl doesn't even know about the letter.

 

[goodhunter]

The page where she drags him is beyond clever. Only someone with a crush would notice all that.

Yup, I was going to point this out. The things she pointed out were very minor things that could easily be changed, and someone could only notice all of that if she was observing him for a while. She was playing tsundere though. It's also the reason why the moment she got hugged, she didn't play flabbergasted or anything, it's like she was wishing for this the whole time, hoping he'd reciprocate without her having to tell him outright.

 

[Haydrion101]

Yup, I was going to point this out. The things she pointed out were very minor things that could easily be changed, and someone could only notice all of that if she was observing him for a while. She was playing tsundere though. It's also the reason why the moment she got hugged, she didn't play flabbergasted or anything, it's like she was wishing for this the whole time, hoping he'd reciprocate without her having to tell him outright.

One can also see her grabbing her skirt when handing over her friend's letter. Thats typically something done outta anxiousness, reluctance, or pain. She didnt wanna give our boy up.

Goddang this is such a good oneshot... 🥰

 

[deadrabbits]

grinning like an idiot

I wish people would stop using this phrase. it sounds retarded.

 

[Chesburbger]

I wish people would stop using this phrase. it sounds retarded.

smiling like a goofball

 

[maylsmallow]

Damn it why good plot always one shot

 

[Leyte]

this is the one oneshot manga that made me feel the love he had and the emotions he felt, the story was so good that you can feel the emotions of the main character

 

[danthemanz]

We get peak writing like this that only gets a oneshot while rent a girlfriend manages to go on for over 400 chapters...

It's a cruel world we live in....

 

[ycnbm_8]

I hate both girls.

 

[comfortablelies]

This is some damn fine tsundere action, great girl. Love that the MC actually improves himself too. You rarely see that.

 

[Otaku_guy11222]

God I love rereading this every year

 

[pdonk]

this is still a classic. A shame the mangaka (Miyokawa Masaru) never really did much beyond this, just a 1-volume series in 2014, and a 4-volume series in 2019 is the most recent.

talk about diverging paths: in 2011, Miyokawa did the art on a WSJ series ST&RS that didn't make much of a splash, but the writer for that series, Takeuchi Ryosuke, went on to write All You Need Is Kill, and then Moriarty the Patriot.

 

[Aceee3000]

OneShot? Really? I might just Oneshot myself then

 

[WhiteRabbitBR]

Its peak

 

[Keplite]

I think a few changes to the characters and use the baseball games as a way to show progress and it could definitely be serialized.

The character's cores would remain the same, but instead of the MC being lame for the sake of it (which works for a one shot) he would need a reason for it. Like what if he was trying to process the death of his mother, and his friends ditch him because of the negative behavior he exhibits be cause of it. This would kind of scar him. In the moment he wouldn't understand but it would be his depressed state and inability to think positively.

Main Girl would have a bit of on obsession with baseball. Not enough to color her personality and change who she is but enough to know what she's looking for. She would come to know the MC from his notoriety in middle school. He was a great player but declined really fast as he had to deal with the death of his mother and ultimately quitting.

She would then find him roaming the halls of their high school and take notice. This would lead her to take the actions she does in the one shot.

He would still get some strong feelings for the other girl, and the beginning would play out like it did only he'd join the baseball team late.

It think that does it for serialization fixes.

So I'm wrong as others have pointed out. Noted.

I'd also rather not be pinged by this again please and thank you.

ping

 

[ududjeisie]

I think a few changes to the characters and use the baseball games as a way to show progress and it could definitely be serialized.

The character's cores would remain the same, but instead of the MC being lame for the sake of it (which works for a one shot) he would need a reason for it. Like what if he was trying to process the death of his mother, and his friends ditch him because of the negative behavior he exhibits be cause of it. This would kind of scar him. In the moment he wouldn't understand but it would be his depressed state and inability to think positively.

Main Girl would have a bit of on obsession with baseball. Not enough to color her personality and change who she is but enough to know what she's looking for. She would come to know the MC from his notoriety in middle school. He was a great player but declined really fast as he had to deal with the death of his mother and ultimately quitting.

She would then find him roaming the halls of their high school and take notice. This would lead her to take the actions she does in the one shot.

He would still get some strong feelings for the other girl, and the beginning would play out like it did only he'd join the baseball team late.

It think that does it for serialization fixes.

So I'm wrong as others have pointed out. Noted.

I'd also rather not be pinged by this again please and thank you.

You had one person give you a dumb reaction, bro. It’s not that serious.