Page 23, top right speech bubble feels wrong.
Current: If that pillar was that important, you would have protected it. You haven't gathered enough energy. So it would trouble you, after all.
Proposal: If that pillar wasn't that important, you wouldn't have protected it. You haven't gathered enough energy. So it would trouble you after all.
Reason:
Current implies, that the pillar was unimportant because it was not protected. Then why would the destruction of the pillar "would trouble you"?
Proposal implies, that the pillar was important because it was protected. That's why its destruction "would trouble you".