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All the idiot princess had to say was
"I was used"
But, for some reason, the author is incapable of not only plot lines, pacing, and character development... they're also incapable of basic logic.
This is some of the worst writing I've ever been subjected to, and I've worked as a professional proofreader and editor.
This is utter slush, and should never have been published.
"I was used"
But, for some reason, the author is incapable of not only plot lines, pacing, and character development... they're also incapable of basic logic.
This is some of the worst writing I've ever been subjected to, and I've worked as a professional proofreader and editor.
This is utter slush, and should never have been published.
