Hisshou Dungeon Unei Houhou - Ch. 7

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I think saving the "oh so pure and innocent" stupid dumb fk of a princess was a bad idea.
 
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Well, having children was a way to secure agreements since the child would basically be the manifestation of the agreement. It is kinda like taking a hostage.

Though, in this story's setting I really doubt that is the case and is more like the author trying to write in a harem.
The female characters seem to fill the role of justifying everything "yuki-sama" does so he never has to explain everything. There are always other girls who justify what the MC does through the power of cute girl exposition. =\
 
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As PerfectDeath noted, the child thing might be a binding to the dungeon king thing. But I also that this is just an excuse as their main motivation seems to be bullying/destroying her by sullying her.

Actually this ""oh so pure and innocent" stupid dumb fk of a princess" is the only person in this chapter, that made any sense. This sign in the dungeon entrance also confuses me. How should a so crude and fault-prone plan work? By a chance of 1:100?
1. Maiden stops by being confused.
2. She gets hurt.
3. She moves into the dungeon.
4. Solders also get confused, but interpret this in a favourable way by thinking the dungeon has been cleaned out, so that they let their guards a bit down.
5. Soldiers follow her into the dungeon.

I'm okay with step 5 and somehow with 3, but what if:
1. There are soldiers behind her! I wouldn't have stopped and read that sign in her place and in first place.
2. She was never in danger? Those arrows could also have hit her in the neck, backbone, the back of her head or punctuated her heart. Ever heard of poison? Some kill within seconds. What if her leg would have been hurt in a way immobilising her?
3. The sign might have confused her to NOT enter the cave. ;D
4. That sign looks suspicious. Better be on alert.

And every character is okay with that plan? They even figured it out on themselves? And the princess is the dumb one? The author tries to hard to be clever. He constructs plans like "incredible machines" and let the characters state how cunning those plans and how deceiving those political intrigues are. The fundamental idea is great. Building a dungeon into a city. But in the end it's just another harem story with not too bad bitching among the girls and a bit fantasy world setting around it.
 
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@Waoweewoo Wah? How do you not wake up from that!? Especially since the word "they" was in there. Like....how?

@Qelix Agreed, it was one of the stupidest plans I've ever seen in a not comedy manga. Thought there was gonna be a punch line, but nope, just stupid. I was actually pissed off the maid apologized. Instead of "The planned involved her friend getting shot, so back off you stupid bitches" we get "sorry, she's emotional." -_-
 
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possibility #1: if she's not a "maiden" then she cannot be a "holy maiden" anymore and wont be targeted by those idiots
possibility #2: author just wants to get this axed so they can do something else
possibility #3: this has secretly been a H series all along and we just didn't really know about it until chap 8

honestly, this could have been great, but it's going like cliche crap and will probably collapse due to lack of story behind all the "plot" the author threw in there
 
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the f?
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those revelations -.- the seem so dumb
it's impossible not to wake up at that moment -.-

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I hope that mofo just pretends to sleep. Otherwise this desereves drop for beeing dumb.
 
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The reason he didn't wake up after all of that is
because of Labris's sleep magic, let's consider it as a featured power of her kind, the Succubus. And no, they didn't do it. All the girls assaulted him at nights (mostly the loli group) were just involved in fellatio or some sort. The excuses probably must be like "I don't want to do it without his consent" or "I want my first time to be properly done". So yeah, until he got to marry them, they just conducted some kind of sexual activities (with him putting to sleep like a log), but never actually did it.
 
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What the fuck is going on with this story. Feels like it's jumping here and there. Schemes are half assed and forced trying to be clever.
 
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If you can kill a moose with a single weak arrow-shot in 30 seconds by suffocation by blood flooding its lungs and spewing all over the ground through its front orifices, then you can definitely...

... kill a girl will a couple of bolts shot from war-crossbows at what was apparently nearly point-blank range.

"MC-sama, your plan failed! She had a 95% chance of death, and she died! We won't be in you harem anymore! *fwipfwip dead*"

Also:
"We don't need a ruler, just a representative!"
"... How many represe-"
"JUST ONE! One representative to rule over all and in the fire bind them."
 
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alot of people dont like this series , but lets be honest YOU STILL READING IT which mean you like it but you keep bitching xD
 
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I don`t think she can garantee that last part there...
 
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I read a manga about a mangaka. The story said one of the greatest line that i can never forget.
"the intelligence of characters in a manga can only be as intelligent as the mangaka"
So whenever i read this type of stories i keep remembering this sentence.
 
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All countries/peoples in their "civilized" infancy had the patriarch, which basic goal was protecting his family. It was not a representative democracy, it was a dictatorship of sorts.
The founders eventually became "King and Nobles".
The Japanese appear to deny these concepts, especially considering their brutal history.

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Well, I guess then it's time to call it then.
It only takes one chapter like this to prematurely ruin a light novel. Especially when you got people such as your self making people question why they didn't quit sooner.
 
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That's what you get for leaving a succubus in charge of the dungeon.

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The Japanese deny everything about their brutal History. According to the Japanese government the IJA wasn't even IN Nanking in 1938.
 
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what a sloppy kingdom rebellions and invasions unchecked and all over the place
and the important people have apparently no sense of self preservation beyond running away
 

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