Hitodzuma Kyoushi ga Oshiego no Joshi koukousei ni do hamari suru Hanashi - Ch. 2

[MangaDex]

 

[YOURI2]

Thanks for the translation!

 

[tbvp]

ty for the chapter!

 

[iikaido]

I see yours are better imo. I was reading the other not knowing you were posting later and they kept spelling sensei as sensee it bothered me way more than i wanted lol.

 

[Kzalca]

Glad I waited for this.

Thanks for the chapter!!!

 

[stormsky92]

Finally the superior translation is out.

 

[jk5654]

Thank you for the translation! I actually really appreciate your discussion regarding the Sensei terminology as that was a point of confusion for me when I read the original novels.

The manga is growing on me after this chapter. I think it’s finding its footing in terms of bringing out the most important aspects of what makes the story work. It’s very very hard to capture the writing of the source material (something that I think Adachi and Shimamura, one of the author’s other works, struggles with in it’s own manga adaptation) in a way that does it justice. Of course, many of the fascinating aspects of Itsuki’s psychology are yet to be shown, but this definitely promising!

 

[Ichigo69]

I see yours are better imo. I was reading the other not knowing you were posting later and they kept spelling sensei as sensee it bothered me way more than i wanted lol.

You know... they explained that.... (not sure if I like it or not, but it does kinda make sense...

 

[JKTV]

holy moly when will we get a chapter 3? i swear we gonna get two more versions of chapter 2

 

[registeredusername]

a lot of these tl notes are pretty unnecessary and (in my opinion) harm the reading experience more than help it.

 

[TriangleCircleSquare]

a lot of these tl notes are pretty unnecessary and (in my opinion) harm the reading experience more than help it.

I'm assuming you're referring to the ones in the pages themselves rather than at the end (I know even the ones at the end are bad enough too...)
I do admit I myself also felt like I went over the top in this chapter with those.

This time, I actually really wanted to include the "Sensei" terminology thesis, because multiple friends had asked me about it likely due to the sniper's usage of it, and the novel as well. And I had to explain a lot which took up so much space that I made that notes page even larger. I wasn't sure about splitting even that page into two -- having 3 extra pages at the end just for my notes sounded so stupid to me. So the other notes had to go in the pages themselves.

For now, I went ahead and yeeted the "Sensei" terminology thesis to its own page, then moved most of the notes to actually be in the chapter notes page. And hopefully in the future, there'll be no more of these massive yaps at the end of the chapter (especially the personal notes -- I had intended to keep it non-existent/very short starting this chapter, but this sniping thing started and I felt like I had to say something), so most of the chapter notes will actually be there rather than in pages, and we'll only have two pages at the end. I'll just bite the bullet and use 3 pages for notes this time.

I think I'll keep the one about the love thing in the same page as I personally think that's actually critical to clarify ASAP, in case people skip the TLNs at the end. I also do wanna keep the one at the beginning that serves as a reminder to read the second half of Ch.1, at least for now, given the fiasco that happened with the re-upload. I'll remove that one entirely at some point in the future.

Thank you for the feedback, and I'm very sorry if this made for a worse reading experience for you or anyone else . I hope the band-aids are good enough, and I'll defo be extra mindful of this for future chapters!

holy moly when will we get a chapter 3? i swear we gonna get two more versions of chapter 2

Sorry, but even if you ask me that... I don't think this is my fault >.<
I'll have a little surprise for the next release though to compensate for all of the trouble. Look forward to it!

 

[lilyloverxoxo]

Thanks for the TL! ❤️

 

[mijarena]

I see yours are better imo. I was reading the other not knowing you were posting later and they kept spelling sensei as sensee it bothered me way more than i wanted lol.

Well, that is how it is spoken

 

[registeredusername]

I'm assuming you're referring to the ones in the pages themselves rather than at the end (I know even the ones at the end are bad enough too...)

yeah I meant only the in chapter notes. I don't think the post chapter write-ups are bad at all since they're not in the chapter itself taking my attention off of what's going on (and I really enjoy reading about translators thought processes).

I wasn't sure about splitting even that page into two -- having 3 extra pages at the end just for my notes sounded so stupid to me.

I don't really see much issue with having a large number of extra pages if you're explaining things that you feel need to be for the sake of further enjoying/understanding the work.

I think I'll keep the one about the love thing in the same page as I personally think that's actually critical to clarify ASAP, in case people skip the TLNs at the end.

that's fine with me since it's directly relevant to the actual reading experience, although I'm curious if crush vs love would get the point across well enough to not require it.

Thank you for the feedback, and I'm very sorry if this made for a worse reading experience for you or anyone else . I hope the band-aids are good enough, and I'll defo be extra mindful of this for future chapters!

yw and don't worry too much about it. I appreciate you being so receptive to feedback, the band-aids certainly do help.