"Hitokiri" Shoujo Koushaku Reijou no Goei ni Naru - Ch. 14

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What an excessively forced story. This is all happening in front of another city ran by a different noble, one that's on her side, and, yet, none of their people are to be found. Not a single civilian either. Somehow an ambush happened right in front of the gates to that type of city. An entire army showed up and no concern was shown by anyone, apparently😅. It's too forced and illogical to be enjoyable. The story was doing fine until they brought in this prince that defies the laws of logic.
 
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Wait wait wait wait pause, 2 things :
-did the author forgot she already broke her sword last chapter ?

And..

-DID SHE JUST PARRY THE SHOCKWAVE ?

 
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So the antagonist is comically 2 dimensional.. way too evil and stupid.. I wish the antagonists in the Yuri series were complex..
I mean power and ego , it's simple but you'd be surprised how this is quite a common trait irl especially with men
 

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