Hitorigurashi, Netsu o Dasu. Koi o Shiru. - Vol. 3 Ch. 15 - Stalker x Stalker

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the chapter was long.
I kinda waited for a better reveal. More honest? This one feels like just a slip. Somehow unfullfilling.
What was with the fonts throughout the chapter? It was kinda hard to read at times
 
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I guess he finally saw through the Clark Kent routine. How will this play out?
 
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not only. Why were you using so many fonts? It felt like each frame used new one. As if 20 different typesetters were doing it. As soon as I got used to one, it was replaced by another.
The raws used many different fonts for different contexts/characters/tone so I was carrying that over. Tachibana as Momoka used, I believe, at least five different fonts, including handwritten.

I did, however, mistakenly switch which font I was using for the round thinking bubbles between page 8 to page 10, but I've corrected that. The italicized font was a little painful to read on a review, so I just replaced it entirely.
 
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Tf is this empathy for stalkers shit? Just call the cops man.
Sympathy does not equate to justification. The two of them are sympathetic in that they aren't the violently obsessive types looking to dominate and control the life of the person they're stalking; their motivations are out of a sincere sense of appreciation and gratitude, and an inability to simply voice their thanks. So they kept looking for the "right time" and it eventually morphed into affection and fascination. They're only sympathetic because they're harmless. I mean hell, the FMC bought a stun baton just in case.

But the narrative is not justifying their actions. Even the FMC herself, especially after this chapter, admits that stalking is wrong and has no justification. She knows it's wrong, knows it's a violation of the MC's privacy and trust, and knows that it can't continue.
 

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