Hitozuma to JK - Vol. 4 Ch. 29

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So she cheats on her husband with a child, and now is cheating on that child with mao... this women couldnt commit if there were only 2 ppl on earth amd she was one of them lolol
 
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So she cheats on her husband with a child, and now is cheating on that child with mao... this women couldnt commit if there were only 2 ppl on earth amd she was one of them lolol
She hasn't done any cheating with Mao, though? I won't pretend Mizuki wouldn't go for it if Mao actually pressed the issue, but so far she seems to be weirdly loyal to Hinata.

Mao, on the other hand, wants to be a homewrecker so badly she can't even stick to her own lie. I actually like how everyone on this manga is absolute trash.
 
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Just make that dream reality. I do like that she is in distress over what she's doing but too horny for the ladies to be able to stop.
 
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This definitely could use a proofreading pass--there's a few wrong words and a bunch of wrong morphology. I'm always surprised by lack of PR, since basically any native English speaker can do it, unlike translation, cl/rd, typesetting, etc.

Ditto. I guess not every native speaker notices written errors as readily. But I was seeing a lot of mistakes pop out without even looking out for them. "extend" instead of 'extent", "when we bump" instead of "when we bumped", "compare" for "compared" (debatable), "rent sailor uniform" for "...uniforms", probably more.
 

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