Homeless Tensei: Isekai de Jiyuu Sugiru Jikyuu Jisoku Seikatsu - Vol. 1 Ch. 2.2 - Second half

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The scenery in that last panel makes me question something. like who thought that was good enough to publish? 🙃
 
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The scenery in that last panel makes me question something. like who thought that was good enough to publish? 🙃

Apparently the artist did, who couldn’t even be bothered to trace over an image and instead just slapped a photoshop filter onto a photograph...a poorly done job at that.
 
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pacing seems a bit fast, like things just happen. plus if the girl is a luggage carrier with no offensive attacks, how did she end up alone near the bottom of a dungeon? how did MC survive in the 18th floor for so long at beginner level and naked? had good luck, or he started at an upper floor and made his way down? oh well, adding more isekai to my list 😎
 
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@Akemua if claiming there's none with 20+ then you forgetting about https://mangadex.org/title/23267/bijo-to-kenja-to-majin-no-ken
 
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@Vykos - I never said that. I said that instead of making 20-year-olds the new "thing", it's old guys. And that's true, that's why there are like 4-5 now and more coming out. You have 1 about a 20-year-old. And hold up, I read LN's so I know there are a few. But again, that would be missing my point.
 
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@Vykos There is the old worn out adventurer drunk who pulls out the perverted hero sword though that isn't isekai. Not sure if the one about the guy who goes to the nihonium dungeon to get seeds to power up his skills
 
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@Aichan in this scenario he would be like " You put too much spice , the british empire is invading"
 
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WOw shit this is the first time a Japanese isekai'd MC is terribad at cooking!
 
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Okay why not stay at the house with the doping water? Killing mobs drink, killing more mobs drink, and when you're tired eat the mobs and drink and sleep in the proper secret secure house... why not use this opportunity to grow strong?
 
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Try putting that communism thing on a manhua and see how fast people stop reading your scans.
 
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The translators are either sarcastic about communism or have a screw loose if they really think it's a good ideology.
 
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The artist seems to be drawing the ribcage as though it was a box and not a cylindrical shape. The result becomes the far boob always appearing way forward of where it should originate on the 3/4 views.

Yes, that was what I was focusing on, fight me.

(That and the ever satisfying boobs overhanging the panel trick)

😀
 
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Ah, yes, I shall now enter my KV-1 and load it with AP rounds for the motherland.
 
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Something disturbs me about a 19-year-old elf being lost on the 19th floor of an ancient and mysterious labyrinth. She's obviously the token fan service, but come on, what were her parents (or her guards, since it looks like she's a noble) that she got lost so deep in the labyrinth.

Edit: OK, so she's an adventurer, that makes more sense, so likely her party abandoned her. I mean she just said she was an adventurer that specializes in carrying luggage with a smile on her face, she either has some real issues or just really likes to carry luggage. I found it hilarious how the homeless guy just plain insulted her by saying "if qualifications and knowledge aren't required." Like she had no qualifications or knowledge.

There's something about this manga is throwing me off; it might the pacing, so many convenient things have happened in the past few chapters all at once with little to no explanation or having any impact on the story..

First, a year passes, then all of a sudden he finds clothes, skills level up, encounters a busty elf unconscious on the floor, finds a sacred pool (that he somehow missed despite living on the 19th floor for a year), finds the secret room, then finds a map, and then they just leave.

I mean the room looked like a pretty big deal, owned by a powerful mage and all they took away from it was a map? No super powerful magical artifacts, no legendary weapon, no ancient grimoires or tomes, a map. Although I get that it was a way for the author to easily give the main character a home base in the labyrinth so that they can explore I feel like more could've been done story-wise rather than just the main character coincidentally pressing a button and finding a secret room that was built hundreds of years ago.
 

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