I feel like it's funny, but it's a pain to read. Darkening the writing helps (I didn't go through it, just wanted to see if smt changed on the later chapters, and yes it's better imo).
I like their dynamic but it's not really funny so i'm not sure if this is mid or very good. Maybe would've been better on a different format than 4-koma.
are there some untranslated chapter inbetween some of these or does the mangaka just reference things that was never written? I feel like it happened more than once but idk