Honzuki no Gekokujou: Shisho ni Naru Tame ni wa Shudan o Erandeiraremasen—Dai 3-bu: Ryouchi ni Hon o Hirogeyou! - Vol. 5 Ch. 25 - Hasse's Orphans and…

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It's okay if you feel like you can do better than what other have done.
It's great. Go get it, man.
no one is gonna complaint for better and higher res

But I feel like it's very bold of you calling the other translation for this series as god awful.
I mean, I don't know which one specifically you're talking about, but I've definitely seen worse
 
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You call the other translation trash, and then do things like call mattresses futons (this is a western style fantasy, not Japan regardless of what the original Japanese word is), and then leave in a random desu.

I did not see anything actually done better here besides the raw. Which, I will admit, is a significant improvement.
 
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You call the other translation trash, and then do things like call mattresses futons (this is a western style fantasy, not Japan regardless of what the original Japanese word is), and then leave in a random desu.

I did not see anything actually done better here besides the raw. Which, I will admit, is a significant improvement.
There were typos, missing words, and words that don’t belong in a European Fantasy setting. Truly sloppy work.
 
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Good job with the cleaning. Could have used a better font. The translation is ok, but I think it could have done with another proofreading and you could have translated terms like "futon".
 
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Myne has great leadership qualities, but she still needs to learn when to get angry
Good thing she has 2 great teachers :D
 
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Thanks for the higher quality, better typesetting, and cleaner translation.
Your goal is admirable but a challenging one, but may it prove very rewarding for you!.
 
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Try not being so caustic in the criticisms of the previous translation to minimize retaliatory feedback against you.

This could have been a purely positive thread.
 

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