Houjou Urara no Ren'ai Shousetsu Okakinasai! - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.2

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page8 "meta mptake" ---> "meta take" (???, not sure how to translate メタオチ)

Threatening your favorite author into writing a genre outside of his comfort zone? Negative 500 IQ play.
 
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I truly hate the tsundere, I loathe them but this story has caught my interest. Im not saying that i like the tsundere here
 
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well, at least she just ask him to write love story, not dictating him how to write or something like that
 
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Spoiled rich young lady is not used to act in the not rotten way huh
 
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The characters are a bit beta, but I’m glad they learned quickly.

Idk if I should feel sad or angry that she cried and believes it’ll make it better when it’s clearly her fault. But then again I’m probably thinking too much and she just lacks the social skills and is easily misunderstood
 
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not even ch 2 and we have established the blackmail relationship.....FFS! and it was right after she fixed the misunderstanding!
 
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I remember in chapter 1.2, the mc said he had an anti-social personality disorder. I'm pretty sure that was a mistranslation, as anti-social personalities are generally psychopathy, sociopathy, and narcissistic personality disorder.
 
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Dammit, she was so close. That was her chance to use his inexperience with love to get into a relationship. I guess blackmail works too though.

@Zero117 I do not know if it was intentional, but that comment was very tsundere.
 
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A tsundere that knows if she did something bad

This is the second time I have seen this tbh I like this type of tsundere cause unlike the other once that mindlessly slap or torture the MC and doesn’t think it’s wrong are fking annoying and for some reason they win.
 
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We were so close to clearing up that misunderstanding in record speed. I was about to jump for joy and applaud the author for getting rid of it and paving the way for an interesting plot and dynamic between the two without the misunderstanding, and then the ending happened. Well, the initial premise from the first part of chapter one was still fine, so I’ll hopefully still enjoy reading it. Its just there was a PERFECT set up to vastly improve the story and turn fun into fun-freaking-tastic and then we just drove straight past that turn off and made a u-turn to to back the way we came.
 
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I like that she's a self-aware tsundere and knows her mistakes and trys to fix it, she's just always drunk in the moment, I feel like something good may come from this

Also, I can help with writing that but if she just truly want to see a magnificent work I can give the basics on how most good romance stories go
 

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