Hyperinflation - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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How the fuck is Luke a male? I have no idea how it's possible, his costume clearly shows next to nothing down there.
On the other hand, it's great when an MC uses his head for more than just keeping his ears apart. After plan B, I expect his sister's kidnappers will have to face plans C and D. I look forward to that.
 
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You guys need to work on your grammar.
Currently working on it.
I was scanlating this manga alone when I released this chapter.
M4D_A0 joined me since chapter 6, and he is much better than me at English and Japanese.
I am fixing every chapter prior to chapter 6, they will be fixed.
 
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Currently working on it.
I was scanlating this manga alone when I released this chapter.
M4D_A0 joined me since chapter 6, and he is much better than me at English and Japanese.
I am fixing every chapter prior to chapter 6, they will be fixed.
Good to hear. If you want a good tip, try vocal scripting. Say the line out loud with the inclination the character is putting to it and it should help you make it feel more natural.
 
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Good to hear. If you want a good tip, try vocal scripting. Say the line out loud with the inclination the character is putting to it and it should help you make it feel more natural.

Thanks for the tip, I will try it.
People prefer to compliment than to criticize, and while I appreciate each and every compliment, it's criticism that makes you better.
Please let me know if you see anything else you think should be improved.
 

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