I Bid You Adieu - Ch. 4

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"Like this, my connection with Asad was broken."

That's what you think 😏
 
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The art is nice but the writing feels a bit hammy. "Accidentally " talk infront of "sleeping" person. Breaking off with the fiancee while internal monologue is all about how her panties are frothing to the seams. It's so hammy I am laughing half the time I am reading.
 
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Ah yeah, its still early enough to place bets!
Boy would it be unique and different if her engagment stayed broken and he didn't suddenly find her "interdastin" cuz she's acting different.
 
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wait... so she showed up without the debt bill in hand?
how the F is he supposed to believe her words then?
She just showed up without a plan at all?
 
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Why didn't she bring the contract? She was imagining it being torn probably vshould have did that in front of him. Unless her father has it but why? I though it was her scheme
Thanks for the update
 
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The villain looks quite pretty with all the expressions she shows. Good art. Tho the ML looks kinda dull. And his scars kinda appear and disappear.
 
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I wonder if he actually does love her. And he was happy being one of her conquests. And now he doesn't want to be tossed away. Interesting.

Thanks for the upload!
 
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Thank you!
So. She just went there to ask him to break off their engagement without the contract?
 
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I know?!? That what I was thinking? If that's all she had to said I would have just written a letter. "Hey, i'm breaking up with you, i'll be at your house tomorrow w/ contract."
 
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its quite lacking, both the writing and the art
sticking around to see if it gets any better
thank you for the update
 

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