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Is it just me, or does surya scans really have bad grammar?
Like, in chapter 16, they wrote things like "there's a condition that it should benefit both parties if you want to cooperate." Or "so, it has been decided for what you find it randomly, so how about we divide the cube we don't need?"
 
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As someone else has already said, the grammar is atrocious at points that it makes me go back and re-read parts just so i can figure out whats happening.
 
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It's not only the grammar that sucks, names are not coherent so even after reading everything, I don't know the names of half of the characters because they keep changing.
 
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I dunno, throwing these "god-like gamerz (lol)" into something like Factorio where your "superz haxxor skillz(tm)" doesn't matter once in a while will probably get something a bit more interesting than the usual trashes that got produced.
 
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Not only is the grammar and name thing a problem, but the art isnt great either tbh.
 
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  • This tries to be everything good from other novels/manhwa so hard that it fails to be anything.
  • It's so rushed it feels like someone adapted not the novel, but its summary.
  • The art is more inconsistent than a women deciding what she wants to eat.
  • The other characters are more useless than Aqua.
 

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