I Have to Be a Monster

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My god, it started out promising, but dam are the signs of a bad writer clear by chappter 23, people saying stupid things, its like the writer has no idea what Military is or how goverments work or operate. Its an intresting premise with good art, but the writeing is crings, if the creator gets a ghost writer, jt would help him greatly.
 
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Honestly, it's annoying that he still helps humanity while claiming he wouldn't care -_-
 
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My god, it started out promising, but dam are the signs of a bad writer clear by chappter 23, people saying stupid things, its like the writer has no idea what Military is or how goverments work or operate. Its an intresting premise with good art, but the writeing is crings, if the creator gets a ghost writer, jt would help him greatly.
Pretty much summing up all my issues with it, and most likely why it got cancelled. Writer had really good ideas but no good way of tying them together or explaining things well.
 

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