I Log in Alone - Ch. 10

[UncleKarma]

This has potential but it feel like a wall of exposition keep blocking it out. Every time a story could be told or we could learn more about a character its blocked out by what could basically a 'Videogame guide book'. Ah-rin is making Navi's or Omochao's Explanations look like a simple tip on a sign. And people did compare the title and description to solo leveling, but unlike solo leveling it only explained what it needed to and then continued developing it character or put the Exposition and the action together to not make it a chore on the person reading to understand what is happening. I feel this could be great but they need to act like there audience has some knowledge on games and not trying to spoon feed them like every bit of it until they can't take it anymore

@jimmyclear No we had enough exposition in this chapter WE DONT NEED MORE

 

[sonyaism]

Was that you General Armstrong!?

 

[N0Mi0]

First not unintentional physical contact:

And this one is intentional already:

P.S. Still dick too big

 

[Aegeld]

@UncleKarma Pretty sure it could go on for a few chapters and after that the plot start to move.